[PetiteCloud] Layerered architecture for a cloud computing platform

Anya Deason anya.deason at gmail.com
Sun Mar 23 00:23:38 PDT 2014


Dee,

Well, one thing we are instructed to do when writing accessible articles for the general public involves defining terms sequentially. Explain the theory before repeatedly using the term. I would not use parenthesis and brackets. I use those sometimes, though not in formal writing. 

Anya

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> On Mar 23, 2014, at 1:56 AM, "Dee Nixon" <dnixon-fnre at nyclocal.net> wrote:
> 
> I've made various changes to petitecloud.org, especially the
> "layers" page:
> 
> http://petitecloud.org/layers.jsp
> 
> I would appreciate comments.
> 
> Dee
> 
> 
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